pt. 1 ch. 9 - Page 1

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MistakeNPotatoes
23rd Jun 2017, 10:30 AM

Okay! I would like to preemptively apologize for the quality of this, and the following 2-3 pages. I was in an 'emotionally compromised state' when I created them and I am personally not pleased with the art or the composition, which is very frustrating.

I'm not trying to make a big deal out of it, and NOW I'm fine (these were drawn 4 weeks ago or so) I just remember being really worked up about them, so, yeah, laying that on the table :')

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kyrtuck
23rd Jun 2017, 10:49 AM

Sorry to hear about that buddy

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MistakeNPotatoes
23rd Jun 2017, 10:52 AM

I'm fine, as I said. I suppose 3 is an appropriate rating.

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Memoria Caelestie
23rd Jun 2017, 10:51 AM

Man clara is looking real stylish here! I dunno but I would not want a statue like that in my house. I feel like it would take life of it own and eat my brain!

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MistakeNPotatoes
23rd Jun 2017, 11:16 AM

I super didn't do her justice in this scene - I promise to draw this outfit better going forward :)

And yeah, that sculpture is just a tad creepy to have in your own home...

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Memoria Caelestie
23rd Jun 2017, 11:42 AM

i dunno she looks really pretty in that dress so i think you did justice to her ya!

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Mgnostic
23rd Jun 2017, 2:23 PM

I understand about being your own harshest critic. On the other hand it still moves the story forward. That is a pretty slick deflection on her part.

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Bob Mozark
23rd Jun 2017, 3:27 PM

I really like the gowns that women wore in the 20s and 30s. The costume design was one of my favorite parts of the Peter Ustinov "Poirot" movies.

Claire's gown is nicely drawn. Beginning artists frequently have problems with the way that gowns drape over the wearer's figure. Clearly, you are not a beginning artist.

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Slim Kittens
23rd Jun 2017, 3:31 PM

As a foreign oddity, hi Clara.

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Pip
23rd Jun 2017, 4:32 PM

This page looks fine to me. The statue looks really neat in particular

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Myetel
23rd Jun 2017, 8:20 PM

Little details make me happy. :) She's wearing an ankh, furthering her claims of fascination with Egyptology.

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Taily
23rd Jun 2017, 9:49 PM

Love that you brought up Egyptomania! Cool bit of real world history to work into the comic :D

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