pt. 1 ch. 11 - Page 29
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MistakeNPotatoes
8th Aug 2018, 10:30 AM

Havin' a tough week. Sorry for late replies on comments, I'm trying to get back to my normal self again.

Hope you all enjoy the page!

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MadJak91
8th Aug 2018, 10:57 AM

...aaaand Jack is lost :<
I am sure somewhere down the line you are going to make them fight against each other. I mean, do not do it but I expect it quite so...

Uh, I am interested on Jaunt's monster body.
LMAO
But ya, is that all his skin or some kind of carapace? It also looks to me like he has double collarbone :D

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MistakeNPotatoes
15th Aug 2018, 10:35 PM

Mayhaps. Again, commenting on speculation.. ;)

Jaunt's 'skin' is layers of chitinous carapace. It tends to grow into gnarls and spines if he doesn't maintain it, which he does. So it's a lot of plates that slide over each other, sort of like an insect :)

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Abibliboop
8th Aug 2018, 11:53 AM

Its nice to know that curiosity (which causes humans so many problems in these stories) also causes problems for the eldritch creatures...

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Twilight
8th Aug 2018, 5:06 PM

Ouch!

Well, I guess that's one way to pass the time. If he's lucky, he'll wake up when they reach their destination.

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...(RockB)
8th Aug 2018, 5:24 PM

Tough luck for Jaunt (that was my first idea before I read the author's comment, ) - first bored to death, then zapped unconscious. And still on the slooow way to his destination.

On top of that, touching that black surface and getting zapped may well also have triggered an alarm.

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MistakeNPotatoes
15th Aug 2018, 10:38 PM

It would certainly seem like it killed the boredom XD Maybe the shambler in the process.. nah, he's fine, right?

In terms of an alarm, ooh, could be, could be..

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MistakeNPotatoes
15th Aug 2018, 10:38 PM

I appreciate you for your readership, but your comments are welcome, too :)

Thank you for the kind words.

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MistakeNPotatoes
15th Aug 2018, 10:39 PM

Thank you! I'm glad someone can see it, because I'm like Jaunt along for the ride here: "Am I there yet? Am I there yet?" XD

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Bob Mozark
12th Aug 2018, 6:22 PM

Hang in there!

You are doing a good job depicting Jaunt as still not fully healed. What happened just now did not help his recuperation, I am thinking.

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MistakeNPotatoes
15th Aug 2018, 10:39 PM

Thank you, Bob!

Nah, there's a really good chance that this didn't help his healing efforts, hah!

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